What do you think of this verse?

first off the soulja boy diss isnt really necessary but im likin that u also noticed the change in "fif" since he first got hot on the radio and whatnot. but in a world where C.R.E.A.M., ur not gonna get a major deal by being real like that.but u will get respect from those who see corruption in mainstream rap/hip-hop thats being sold currently. that said, overall nice job.